Suggestions for the JOSS article
Disclaimer
A lot of changes here are basically nitpicking, but more importantly, they are mere suggestions. Cherrypicking is absolutely fine with me.
Specific points
- Changed formatting for Guy de Spiegeleer's entry in the authors list, as the recommended format (with
given-names
,dropping-particle
andsurname
) was doing something terribly wrong to affiliations in the compiled paper (previewed on the Whedon service). - In the last sentence of the summary, "mode transitions" seemed better than "phase transitions", as the word "phase" is tainted by various semantics (think wave physics vs thermodynamics, for instance).
- Statement of need, paragraph 1: Promoted the agility of the design process as a stringent need instead of a desired feature.
- Drivers, last paragraph: Removed mention of non-existent (sub)section "Design and Simulation Features", probably dross from a previous version.
- Dynamic and multimode systems, paragraph 3: Replaced "dedicated" with "tailor-made", which is way more telling IMO.