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 Here's some things you should know:
 
-* I am a .NET developer who makes a decent living creating software that is primarily written in C#
-* At the end of 2015, I decided to learn functional programming
+* I am a .NET developer who makes a decent living creating software that is primarily written in C#.
+* At the end of 2015, I decided to learn functional programming and chose F# because it had .NET bindings.
 * At the beginning of 2016, I did a video series on game development in F#, which eventually used SDL in project 2.
 * At the end of 2016, I decided a few things.
-  1. I don't like country clubs or ivory towers (metaphorically speaking. you'll either get what I'm saying here or you won't)
-  1. Certain parts of FP(and F#) I like (immutability, function instead of classes) and certain aspects I don't really care for (purity, being idiomatic)
+  1. I don't like country clubs or ivory towers (metaphorically speaking. you'll either get what I'm saying here or you won't).
+  1. Certain parts of FP(and F#) I like (immutability, function instead of classes) and certain aspects I don't really care for (purity, being idiomatic).
   1. SDL2FS is the one thing that I can provide that allows me to progress in my use of F# that people might find useful.