The source project of this merge request has been removed.
Suggestions for the draft Terms (Terms of Service) document.
The attached file contains suggestions for the Terms (Terms of Service) document (note that the Terms document has yet to be directly compared to the Bill of Rights and Privacy Policy documentation).
The attached document is split into two halves, the first half contains suggestions and recommended changes, whilst the second half contains the original draft Terms document.
The numbers that are included at the start each of the elements within the first half refers to the superscripted red notions within the second half.
OpenOffice / LibreOffice (.odt), Rich Text (.rtf) and Microsoft Word (.doc and .docx) versions are available from:
https://www.mcosi.org/minds-policies-draft
Edited by Mark Edworthy