[Stories][Exhaustion] Proofread

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He's listening.
That is, he hears what people say.
Like so many of his fellow colleagues, he hates all these meetings.
Like so many of his fellow developers, he hates all these meetings.
They break the focus and work.
Right now, his mind is still focused on the problem he was trying to solve before his three immediate superiors asked him to join them.
They have moved into the office of one of the vice-presidents, who is absent today.
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His brain is split in two.
One half still hasn't gotten off the point he was analyzing when he left his desk, the other half is listening as carefully as it can with the scarce resources that are still available.
The project manager is explaining the technical bottlenecks they encountered and the measures that he, the architect, has proposed.
The project manager is explaining the technical bottlenecks they encountered and the measures that he, the architect, has suggested.
The sales manager acknowledges and then turns to him to ask:
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What was a first was the message he has sent to his manager tell him his discomfort.
In the answer, he learned that his girlfriend had beaten him to it.
But she couldn't say that he felt trapped or why.
Decision-makers had taken over last year's project, abandoned at the last minute by the client with six months of unpaid bills, and figured it could be used to build something else.
Decision makers had taken over last year's project, abandoned at the last minute by the client with six months of unpaid bills, and figured it could be used to build something else.
They chose bricks their customers use to facilitate the adoption of this future product.
Then it was up to him, the architect, to figure out how to connect it all together.
And if he can't do it, does that mean he doesn't deserve the role?
His superiors have selected him to participate in a "high potential" program that give him extra work.
Again, does not the mere fact that he cannot do what iss expected of him contradict this recognition of his worth?
His superiors have selected him to participate in a "high potential" program that gives him extra work.
Again, does not the mere fact that he cannot do what is expected of him contradict this recognition of his worth?
He hears a car driving by the corner of the building.
Who can still arrive at work at half past ten?
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