Some work-shopped updates to README.md

README.md

-glngn server is an extensible business process as a service application. Conceptually, glngn server is like a code-first
-Microsoft Access or Apple FileMaker for event sourced business services. A
-standalone application is provided that is useful with minimal ceremony. In addition to an
-approachable extension API.  This solution can also be deployed to a kubernetes cluster for sharing
+glngn server is an extensible business process application server. Conceptually, glngn server is a a code-first
+Microsoft Access or Apple FileMaker designed for event sourced business services. An approachable API as well as a
+standalone application that is useful with minimal ceremony are provided. glngn server can be deployed to a kubernetes cluster for sharing
 and reliability.
 
 - Support available from the [DogHeadBone LLC](mailto:support@dogheadbone.com) company
 - Useful built-in services
-- Easy event capture
+- Easy event captures
 - Friendly REST interface with an OpenAPI schema
 - A [high level extension API](http://docs.glngn.com) for Scala service developers.
-  Plain, typed akka and zio interfaces are provided.
-- Simplified persistence
-- Simplified Kubernetes (k8s) cluster deployments. In addition to some custom automation, the akka
+  (Plain, typed akka and zio interfaces are provided.)
+- Simple persistence features
+- Simple Kubernetes (k8s) cluster deployments. In addition to some custom automation, akka
   management tools are included. OpenShift is also supported.
 
 Sound good so far? Excellent! Let's start with basic, interactive usage of the standalone application.