Here are some typos and other suggestions. In some cases I wasn't sure what the intended message was so some of my suggestions might not apply. | Done | Required for Release? | Change | Screen | | ------ | ------| ------ | ------ | | | Yes | Remove the word "around". Remove commas as shown. |  | | | Yes | Fix typos as shown. |  | | | Yes | Fix paragraph as suggested, or suggest another fix. |  | | | Yes | Remove the word "like". |  | | | Yes | Fix typos as shown or provide another suggestion. |  | | | Yes | Fix as shown. |  | | | Yes | Fix as shown. |  | | | Yes | Change as suggested or provide another suggestion. |  |