Follow-up from "EDU automation: ProxyId webhook endpoint": Review email by TW

The following discussion from !13241 should be addressed:

  • @karichards started a discussion: (+1 comment)

    Hi @knockfog-ext in testing these changes I noticed some grammatical errors in the email notification. This might be easier to address in this MR, or in a follow-up since it might need a Technical Writing review.

    Screenshot 2025-08-15 at 2.50.38 PM.png

    This should probably read: You've been verified for Gitlab for Education.

    • Remove unneeded "the"

    Screenshot 2025-08-15 at 2.50.17 PM.png

    This should probably read: select Licensing and Renewal Problems

    • The S in Select should be lowercase
  • The form title was changed to Subscription, License or Customers Portal Problems. Can we change it to read:

    select Subscription, License or Customers Portal Problems

Edited by Rostyslav Safonov