Commit 829cc58e authored by dosire's avatar dosire

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GitLab.com supports organizations and individuals using GitLab. To do this we offer services around GitLab such as subscriptions, consulting and cloud hosting.
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GitLab is a community project with hundreds of contributors. GitLab.com is an active participant in this community, trying to serve its needs and lead by example.
GitLab is a community project with hundreds of contributors.
GitLab.com is an active participant in this community, trying to serve its needs and lead by example.
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<h3>Vision</h3>
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Our vision is that every digital product that is created by more than one person should be managed in distributed version control.
This allows people to cooperate effectively and to achive better results faster.
This allows people to cooperate effectively and to achieve better results, faster.
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<h3>Mission and logo explanation</h3>
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<h3>Team</h3>
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To offer the best possible services our team has a deep expertise in GitLab and all its aspects.
To offer the best possible services our team has a deep expertise in GitLab in all of its aspects.
The GitLab.com team consists of the following individuals:
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