Proofread

This was a great read @codeEmitter

Just a quick proof read with some suggestions.

Notes:

• Feel free to discard any of the edits I made - just suggestions as I went through.
• The gender in the metaphor in the opening was split between "they" and "she". In my edits, I switched to one but of course either would be fine I think as long as it's consistent.
• I broke up some of the bigger paragraphs in the first half to make it easier on the eyes, especially on mobile. If you agree that's a good way to go, it might be worth seeing if there is a logical way to break up the final few sections