Commit b492c194 authored by Annika Backstrom's avatar Annika Backstrom

Change some words

parent 8cebb0b1
......@@ -16,17 +16,18 @@ likely the result of scarring from exposure to ammonia fumes during his
life before being rescued. He and Abe never really got along with our
other rats; they preferred their own quiet, away from the youngsters.
He was always weaker than our other rats. Even Abe with his recurring
He was always the weakest of the bunch. Even Abe with his recurring
tumor was more energetic. We noticed Burrito losing weight over the last
few weeks, and he was cold to the touch the past day or two. I knew in
my heart that today was probably his last day with us.
Burrito, I'll miss your little wheeze as you rested on my lap: I always felt
this weird kinship with you, me with my asthma, you with your own breathing
troubles. I'll miss the way you closed your eyes tight and leaned into my
scritches. I'll miss the way, only in the last days before you
passed on, you finally, determinedly, climbed out of your habitat onto my
shoulders and hands.
Burrito, I'll miss your little wheeze as you rested on my lap: I always
felt this weird kinship with you, me with my asthma, you with your own
breathing troubles. I'll miss the way you closed your eyes tight and
leaned into my scritches. I'll miss the way you would peek out and come
to the door whenever you heard my voice. I'll miss the way, only in the
last days before you passed on, you finally, determinedly, climbed out
of your habitat onto my shoulders and hands.
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