Commit b12a1ea9 authored by Tails developers's avatar Tails developers

Improve phrasing

  - Say "the Internet" as GDP Style Guide
  - 'Access' is a bit more accurate than 'use'
  - Deduplicate 'Tor is ready' and 'now'
parent 8e75fa94
......@@ -20,5 +20,5 @@ TEXTDOMAIN="tails"
/usr/local/sbin/tails-notify-user \
"`gettext \"Tor is now ready\"`" \
"`gettext \"Tor is ready. You can now use Internet.\"`"
"`gettext \"Tor is ready\"`" \
"`gettext \"You can now access the Internet.\"`"
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