npc/014-2/woodywife.txt english grammar

  • mesq l("Be careful to don't get lost in this forest.");
    • suggested corrections:
      • "Be care to [not] get lost in the forest"
  • l("Hey do not take me as a child."), L_Quit,
    • suggested corrections:
      • "Hey[,] do not [mistake] me [for] a child
  • mesq l("I'm Woody Wife, I live here with Woody since a lot of years! We decided to leave away from civilization, hunter and shaman life is way better.");
    • suggested corrections:
      • "I'm Woody Wife, I [have] live[d] here with Woody [for many] years! We decided to [live] away from civilization, [as] hunter and shaman life is way better."
  • mesq l("But now, we are quite old, I remember the time when I was your age. My generation don't do stupid things like yours!");
    • suggested corrections:
      • "But now, we are quite old[.] I remember the time when I was your age. My generation do[es]n't do stupid things like yours!"
  • mesq l("No, we do this during our whole life, And we survive!");
    • suggested corrections:
      • "No, we['ve] do[ne] this during [for] our whole life, [a]nd we [have] survive[d]!"
  • mesq l("My shaman skill protect us, against monsters and thiefs!");
    • suggested corrections:
      • "My shaman skill[s] protect[ed] us[] against monsters and [thieves]!"
  • mesq l("Oh yeah some work are really painful, especially for my back, and I cant bother Woody to do it, he have so many difficulties to move.");
    • suggested corrections:
      • "Oh yeah some work [is] really painful, especially for my back, and I cant bother Woody to do it, he [has] so many difficulties [moving]."
  • mesq l("I need you to bring me some basic item to face Winter! Fire is most important for us.");
    • suggested corrections:
      • "I need you to bring me some basic item[s] to face Winter! Fire is [the] most important for us."
  • mesq l("Winter this year is being really harsh! Fire is most important for us.");
    • suggested corrections:
      • "Winter this year is []really harsh! Fire is [the] most important for us."
  • mes l("Could be nice if you could bring me this:");
    • suggested corrections:
      • "[W]ould be nice if you could bring me [these]:"
  • mesq l("Hey,did you brought me everything I asked for?");
    • suggested corrections:
      • "Hey,[ ]did you [bring] me everything I asked for?"
  • mesq l("Wandering too much? Take care to don't get lost.");
    • suggested corrections:
      • "Wandering too much? Take care to [not] get lost."
  • mesq l("Woody is inside, he probably craft some stuff with animals pelts.");
    • suggested corrections:
      • "Woody is inside, he [is] probably craft[ing] some stuff with animals pelts."
  • mesq l("You could found some bandit in Bandit cave. Yeah this name isen't give for nothing.");
    • suggested corrections:
      • "You could [find some bandit[s] in [the] Bandit cave. Yeah [the] name [wasn't] give[n] for nothing."
  • mesq l("To go there you need to go left, follow rock wall and go up when you can, entrance of Bandit cave is at left side of waterfall.");
    • suggested corrections:
      • "To [get] there you need to go left, follow rock wall and go up when you can[. The] entrance [to the] Bandit cave is [on] left side of [the] waterfall."
  • mesq l("Stranger and monsters aren't allowed to enter in MY house!");
    • suggested corrections:
      • "Stranger[s] and monsters aren't allowed [] in MY house!"
  • mesq l("Anyway, my herb mixture keep monsters away.");
    • suggested corrections:
      • "Anyway, my herb mixture keep[s] monsters away."
Edited by demure